Simulation Report polish

This is the part 1 draft of simulation report, please help me to polish the word expression, grammar problem and imporve sentence structure. In the part 2,3 and 4, i think use too much narrative analysis, please try to make it to \”critical analysis\”, details about critical analysis i will upload PPT file, u can find it in Page11,12. also i will attach draft soon. Keep the word count less than 1700.
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Added on 09.05.2016 06:51
Sorry the part 2,3 and 4 i mentioned above means subtitle 2, 3 and 4
Instruction files

simulation_report_part_1_draft.docx(137,38 KiB)
buss6000_report_writing_sem_1_2016_sc_final.pptx(5,60 MiB)

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