Hello, its me again. This is the essay you wrote for me, but my teacher said the essay is not critical enough.
As a comment he wrote: Try to look critically what Deuchler is writing. It helps to focus on a particular aspect / theorem / quote of Deuchler instead of a broad subject in which it is difficult to be critical. I understand your conclusion, it helps if you ask the question in the conclusion. The introduction should be clear what you are going to discuss in this essay critical.
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