Revision – An Empirical Analysis of Security attacks to create a framework for Network Pen Testing

1. Introduction: The introduction in the original paper starts off a little weak; you need to be introducing the topic head on. You need to be stating what your idea is and how you aim to prove it. Considering other people’s ideas, you need to state here what you intend to achieve and how it is going to help to improve the existing ones. Check the current methodologies in use.
(This introduction has to be different from the earlier one in the first paper please)

2. Research questions:
I have added some research questions in the original document. Please read it and try to streamline the research questions, I think that there are a few too many and they could be rephrased an perhaps one or two removed. Check well please.

2.Aims/Objectives
Check if you can rephrase the aims and objectives in the original paper to make them look better.

3. Literature Review:
Here you need to incorporate the research into the methodologies as the main backbone of the development in your framework. You should base the development of the framework that you are researching upon the established methodologies;that is, you need to review the three main penetration testing methodologies, take the best bits of them and create a 4th methodology, then select the tools that would best meet your framework and test them in comparison with one of the original frameworks (The tools must not be the ones already mentioned, as long as it can be proven) Thou you can still reiterate them if there are no better ones. No need to mention so many tools please. Just few tools in the backtrack distribution is fine, possibly still the ones already mentioned.
Add diagrams where possible and indicate the source of the diagrams.
This chapter should form at least 65 to 70% of the entire work)

4. Conclusion:
Please add conclusion and make it very professional.

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