1- I have attached my professor comments Please read them carefully and edit my research.
2- Need to introduce a substantial amount of legal analysis and comparison into the paper. Much of what I have written focuses mainly on economic theory and political theory, with only passing references to law. This is, a deficiency of the paper that should be addressed.
3- Need more emphasized to law (legislation). I think the legal aspects these topics need to be explored and emphasized, at least to balance out the heavy emphasis you have laid on economic and social aspects.
4- it\’s also need english grammar correction.
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