Problem of \’Essay\’ that i upload
– thesis is not clear and arguable
– no specific evidence and it is not clear
– there is incomplete sentence
– my evidence that i used in my essay is not arguable.
– need to break down the paragraphwhat I learn in this semester
– how to set thesis : position + topic + rational
– how to set 3 good reasons, examples or evidence for body paragraph.
– find 3 pros and cons for body paragraph and how do the pros and cons related to thesis
– i suggest that the 3 examples or evidence should be \’price of art is expensive\’, \’money can be used on new education, or scholarship\’, and \’students has no interest on art\’. then the essay would be had good evidence than i wrote.
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