Gun Rights/ Restrictions

This is a mess it is about how the law is putting more restrictions on guns and making it harder to purchase them. These 6 sources that are used must be reused. I don\’t need just sentence correction i need help putting more explanations why and how, more examples of existing gun laws. i need the paragraphs reorganized and more supporting details. i will attach the professors comments so it will help you fix this essay . Thank you so much sorry for the bad essay.
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