this must be a masters level 7 quality essay. I will upload my original essay i wrote – it needs to be altered and adapted in order to meet my tutors comments and assignment level 7, 2:1 classification requirements.
some new information needs adding and some needs taking out but should still have a similar structure. My essay is too descriptive – it needs to be more critical and the citations need to be written properly against the Harvard style, more formal tone needs to be acquired and i need more updated and new references.
i will add attachments that will show what the essay needs to be improved etc. i have added in red writing in my essay some points which needs to be improved or altered.
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