This is the correction list from the university, I will attach my thesis also , please have a look and see if you can do it, also I will need a research paper after this order for the same thesis
1- Update the reference and literature where needed .
some of the refrences are old dated if you can find some of them and change it with some updated refrences as we need to mention it in our list (for example (Willocks,1993) in page 304.
2- Use the correct/academic style of citation (e.g. 25).
we have to check the refrences style and find some mistakes in the refrences list and in the litrature specially in page 25 as the pointed this one as example.
3- Any other social, economic or culture factors which might be related to technology acceptance however not covered in the study should be briefly
still we need to add another paraghragh in economic factors 8.3.3.8, also in caltural factors I thibk you used only the link that the examinar provided to me but he asked me to do same that not to use only this work but think about it if you can modify it with another refrences not only in that link.
4- Theoretical framework (page 205) should be property titled.
it need a titel but could be Theoritical Map for KRG.
5- The findings of survey in chapter 9 should be related to the theoretical framework.
a new section explaining why the factors in the survey are not similar as the Theoretical map factors and how did we chose them and from where or any thing you think will cover this point.
6- The conclusion chapter should be better written, the conclusion should be made concise and the potential venue of the future research should also be discussed.
hy this chapter need to be some changes and to add another section to the end of the chapter explaining the potintial future reearch that not covered here
+ please let me know if you need more explination.
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