Please revise the paper , my teacher looked over all the students papers and told me I was missing an attention getter and 2 main reasons on how i believe the american dream was possible for paragraph 1 and 2 and there were supposed to be 3 pieces of evidence per paragraph and that I was missing paragraph 3 with the connotations and refutations. Im sorry these things may have slipped my mind but the connotations and refutations were in the instructions. if you could kindly revise this i would greatly appreciate it and before its due
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