Changes need to be done in this paper: 1- Table of content (APA organization) .. 2- there are sources that are not cited in the references so make sure you cite them ( I’ll provide them in additional materials) .. 3- quotation is note cited in APA format so cite them in apa format .. 4- weakness in few sentences (word choice) >> these are the mistakes of the writer .. I appreciate what he did but it need to be fixed .. last thing is to add a good hock in the beginning .. it might sound like big changed but it’s really not .. only few percentage of change i believe .. I ‘ll send pics of the feed back so everything is clear
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