Notes for brains and gender article if chosen. Some errors are ignoring multiple causes, no thesis statement, no use of different evidence, irrelevant info, too many statistics, should be talking that everyone is not making rnough money not only women, 4 paragraphs used to prove women doing better which can be cut into 1, no conclusion, good job showing consequences of going to college
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