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I require some additional work to be added as well as the paper to be revised. I have instructions from my teacher as follows
Chapter 1. Satisfactory, however i think you may need to revise some of your research questions and objectives. For instance ‘ To investigate the effects of the current competitive strategies adopted by mobile operators to restore their profitability’ – this was not followed through in your research and i would advise removing this
Chapter 2. In general this was adequate however some aspects were not covered effectively e.g Utaut model, this was not explained clearly
Also referencing was quite haphazard… for instance on page 21, there is only 1 reference on the entire page. This is meant to be a review of the literature not just an explanation of concepts and theories
Chapter 3
Covered well however
Again referencing crops up here e.g in section 3.3
3.3 Research strategy
The strategy used for this research is surveyed – should read ‘Survey’
Chapter 4
Some issues here
I could not follow the whole point of ‘The effectiveness of the Joyn strategy’ . This was not conducted in an effective manner and i would suggest removing this
Discussion of findings? Students are supposed to examine the findings in the context of the literature – key sources are used to frame the discussion and analyse key findings
However there is no discussion evident at all. There are 10 marks going for this section and i would recommend allocating 3-4 pages for this
Conclusions
These seemed far too broad. You are supposed to refer back to your original research aims and objectives and examine have these been achieved and what are the findings
1. To investigate the current extent of adoption of mobile VoIP/OTTs as a replacement of the traditional voice and SMS services
2. To investigate the perception of users on the vulnerabilities of the existing VoIP/OTT technologies
3. To investigate the future intention of the use of the VoIP/OTT technologies following the consumer knowledge of vulnerabilities
4. To investigate the effects of the current competitive strategies adopted by mobile operators to restore their profitability
These must be examined
Please take on board this feedback and make the necessary changes
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