Since I want a PERSONAL STATEMENT written to use for UCAS admissions since I am in sixth form, I could not find personal statements/appropriate category under high school I want it to be written in my voice. I have seen examples online, I want mine to stand out and not have the cliches that aren’t supposed to be written in good personal statements. I’ve saw statements for my course I want to do of Business Computing. I want it to mention how the business world success and computing world are both successful and growing more and more in today’s age. I want it to be of high standards so I have a better statement than many others so it has to be personal too as since that’s the point of these.
I have been grateful to have had three work experiences. The first in 2013 where I worked for a week in a law firm where I got to experience being in a court room, reading cases, how I would detect which person is innocent etc and to write what I’ve learned from that/skills possibly gained write what I learned. I enjoyed the problem solving and tasks which where a challenge.
The next work experience was working in a primary school (2014) in a small group- team work, communicating better, patience, responsibility, list other skills etc
The next work experience was working in an accountancy firm (2014) for a week and I was given tasks which they would do on a daily basis, doing people’s books, putting it on the system, using sage and excel to create these kind of documents which made me realize I want a career in business and IT its intriguing. There is more careers available in it. valuable experience and gave me an insight to how a business operates.
The a levels I’m doing are Applied Information Technology, Applied business studies and music. Heavy workload/coursework in ICT but I like it because I find it interesting since I love technology and how its modern and this is what the world is coming to. with my subjects especially the amount of coursework and having it to high standards and getting it all done I have learned how to organize my time very wisely which has left me with handing work in before the due date with everything up to standard as I’ve learned how to do all of that better than some can. I like to think that I’m more mature from all of these experiences and how I handle situations i.e. like with the working with perhaps disobedient children etc. Or with school and managing my time/stress and commitments to like piano
When I was younger I used to do drama and have achieved up to grade 6 in this. This experience has helped me become more comfortable as I used to be very shy and quiet and in drama you get to act and emphasize on emotions and that was interesting. With competitions etc as well in this it encouraged me to stay motivated and to practice to get to where I want to.
I have been playing the piano for years so far I’m currently working on my grade 7 it’s more of my hobby as I’m interested in how the world works which is now revolving around business and ict both are equally successful but the both together is even more better. Piano has taught me that hard work, effort and determination always pays off to get to where you want to go.
Late last year/early this year I took part in Young Enterprise (YENI) where some people from my school and I made up our own business, everyone was assigned a role and I was in Sales, it was very important for me to work with finance as they go well together. During this experience I learned how a business works in order to be successful. Had a few events as well to sell our products, since I am sales I had to sell/advertise the product to customers. I have gained invaluable experience in dealing with customers and trying to deliver customer satisfaction at a very high standard, whilst working effectively and efficiently in a well-structured and mannered team.
These need to be mentioned in better/more words, for all of the experiences I listed I need written as well what I’ve learned from it/skills so please add more to make it better.
all of this into better words/standing out personal statement that universities will seek to see me be one of the best applicants from my personal statement would be very much appreciated and an excellent final paragraph i’m not sure how it would finish probably as to why they should pick me to be on their course. like how I’m suitable for Business Computing, how passionate I am about it, how I’m dedicated enough to work hard, the relevant skills i would bring to this course. I want it to stand out- in a good way of course
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