I have uploaded the first draft which is over the “white ship” story. the actual paper which is over the story “the white ship” and the purpose of it was Variation/Adaptation, has to be revised according to the other file I uploaded (my paper analysis). please apply the changes and make the paper a better paper for the Final. U MUST WRITE THE REVISION IN THE FRAME OF THE ACTUAL PAPER WHICH IS OVER “THE WHITE SHIP”. I will not approve the paper if it is not a better paper. I have sent this paper for revision once and the whole content was changed. remember to fix all the problems the paper has and make it a better paper. not a same or different paper! also write a commentary at the end. here are the instructions for the commentary:
Regardless of the option you choose, you will also write an accompanying reflective essay, explaining how your variation or adaptation reveals your interpretation of the original text and what you wanted to accomplish with your text. This part of your assignment is the most crucial and will carry the bulk of your evaluation, but as mentioned earlier, the more effort you invest in the variation or adaptation, the more you will have to write about in the commentary.
Here are some things to think about when writing your commentary:
What you changed and why
What you kept the same and why
The extent to which your imagined audience affected the changes you made
How your changes affect meaning—that is, what your text means verses what the original means
Your intentions or what you wanted your text to do. (Be specific here. Simply saying that you wanted to write a funny poem does not give your reader any insight into why you thought a humorous variation ought to be written at all.)
The extent to which your work is its own work separate from the original
You will submit this paper with the variation or adaptation. Please also include the original work when possible. If you do a group project, each member will write a separate commentary. The paper should be typed, double-spaced in a 12-point fon
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