Here is the draft of what should be a Persuasive Research Paper.  However, it does not seem strong enough.  The argument has to be stronger and there needs to be counter arguments and in-text citations (APA format).  This needs to be a Persuasive research paper consisting of intro/thesis statement; body and supporting evidence with in-text citations/conclusion.  The paper should follow APA guidelines for the reference page and especially with in-text citations.